HELP!

I've got some great news. My sister and I are currently in the process of writing our first novel.

Amazingly, it's not looking too bad the the moment, but it needs a lot of editing and work.

I'm looking to see what people think of our idea. Please please please leave a comment below (or any other way you could communicate to me) about what you think of this idea, whether you would read it, or whether you think it sounds like anything else. We're in dire need of people with this kind of information.

So this is pretty much what would be on the back of the book , were it to be published:


'Evangeline always thought déjà vu was when your brain glitches and can’t figure out the difference between long and short-term memory. That is, until she gets switched and finds herself in a futuristic parallel universe where the government is eradicating anyone deemed undesirable. What’s worse is that her fugitive counterpart has left her in deep trouble. On the run with a man who seems to know her, but that she has never met before, Evangeline is hurled headfirst into an adventure she never wanted.'

It's kind of a sci-fi adventure, with parallel worlds, futuristic gadgets, nods towards psychology and a view of family and friend relationships, as well as government conspiricies. 

We'd love to know what you think.